Thursday, 31 July 2014

The Cheetah

Dylan has been working really hard on his writing in class and he wanted to share this piece that he did. All of the ideas in Dylan's writing came from looking at a picture of a cheetah.

In the hot sun in Africa a hungry cheetah was stalking his prey for food. He could see,hear and smell the dear.The cheetah has bright poka dots and they are black.This cheetah is as fast as lightning.The cheetah has a tiny stumpy tail. It's pearl white. He looks angry because the deer ran away and now the cheetah is sad.

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