Deadly Potion

Ray has been working hard to make his writing interesting. He was given a story starter and he had to come up with the rest of the story.

One day I went to buy a parrot the parrot said"drink the potion our you will get bad luck"but I said NO! So I smashed it on the ground.I went home and the power turned off.When I went to get food I came back and I had been robbed.What else could happen to me? The parrot was right I should of drank the potion.I'm going to ask the parrot if I can get another one.When I got the potion I waited a little while because I wasn't sure what it might do. When I drank the posion everything was over!